Hi Bill! I really like your portfolio story! Your font a good size and easy to read and your blog is easy to navigate. You chose a very interesting topic and I like that your showed the inner struggle Rama was facing after he killed Ravana. It would be nice if you included a title for your story, especially with it being included in your portfolio so the reader knows the topic of your story before reading.
I liked the twist at the end where it shows what Rama that Rama is not actually struggling with the possibility of killing Rama from behind, but rather he is using that dilemma to cover up even deeper worries he hold of whether or not he is fit to rule a city. Great job with character development and I look forward to reading more of your stories as we continue on with the semester.
Hi Bill! I really like your portfolio story! Your font a good size and easy to read and your blog is easy to navigate. You chose a very interesting topic and I like that your showed the inner struggle Rama was facing after he killed Ravana. It would be nice if you included a title for your story, especially with it being included in your portfolio so the reader knows the topic of your story before reading.
ReplyDeleteI liked the twist at the end where it shows what Rama that Rama is not actually struggling with the possibility of killing Rama from behind, but rather he is using that dilemma to cover up even deeper worries he hold of whether or not he is fit to rule a city. Great job with character development and I look forward to reading more of your stories as we continue on with the semester.